User:Laurawhittaker/Dance/Sl968935 Peer Review

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Laura W


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 * Dance
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I think she has a very strong, detailed article. Each section is titled and goes into specific details of the background of dance in general. The only thing I would say to add would be competitive dancing, since it is extremely popular in todays world. Other than that, this article is very well rounded and strong.