User:Lauren.8925/Negative feedback/Ilovesports108 Peer Review

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Lauren.8925


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 * Negative feedback, there is no sandbox draft so I am reviewing the original draft from other wiki writers


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Negative feedback has a lot of key components so there is a lot that can be said about this topic. The article has alot of information on psychological stress but maybe go through and simplify each section. They are a little long and I feel like this article doesn't specifically need to have all this information on it. Normally when I am trying to read something important, I just want to read about the key main factors.

The Wikipedia assignment is for a sports psychology course, and the article has alot of random formulas and equations under the "some specific implementations" section on the article which is generally confusing I feel like. Maybe add more psychology invollement of negative feedback. I'm not sure the article I feel like it could use more of a psychological aspect to it. The article has alot of good information and topics but could be altered or changed