User:Lauren.8925/Psychological stress/Ilovesports108 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lauren.8925


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Psychological stress


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I don't think she has started working on the article at the point I am reviewing it, so I assume the information is from the previous writer or contributors of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

At the beginning of the article is shows a yellow box and within the box it states that the article may not have appropriately summarize the contents within the article based off of Wikipedia's lead section guidelines. I think this is the first thing that should be fixed since there is a Wikipedia notification at the top of the article.

The categories within the article are beneficial based on the main topic. I like how under the causes section of the article it states multiple different types of causes. The title fonts and sizes of this section are all different which should be fixed properly. There is a section under causes labeled "types of stressors" and I think this section title should have a different font or be underlined so people understand this is another subcategory within the causes, and all the other sub sub categories within the "types of stressors." I feel you can also add in chemical imbalances which may cause stress, along with work life, finances, relationships, parenting, fight-or-flight response. There are a number of wide ranges of psychological stress causes that could still be included. Also maybe add more information into the ambient stressors and organizational stressors section. They are short and don't give to much information.

I think there needs to be more important and background knowledge within the measurement section. Its very short and I feel maybe you can add diagrams are charts that are used to measure stress levels.

'''Overall I think the student needs to start added changes to the article, sandbox and biography for me to fully give accurate feedback. Because right now I am really only giving feedback on the previous writers or contributors work.'''