User:Lauren1500/Zan Fiskum/Nbrown16 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lauren1500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zan Fiskum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Article is original. Current version does not exist.
 * Article is original. Current version does not exist.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall a very good start on an article that is completely original. Everything seems to be kept in a neutral tone and all the info provided seems necessary and relevant to the article.

All references are reliable sources and the author links important info from other Wiki's. The article just needs more, maybe a list of songs from Fiskum's article.

The lead is clear and to the point and I understand where the article goes and could go.