User:Lauren1500/Zan Fiskum/Rmudg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lauren1500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zan Fiskum


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zan Fiskum

Evaluate the drafted changes
 Lead: 

Although short, the lead was very informative and told the reader who the singer and songwriter was. That's really cool she's from Maple, WA! So close to home!

 Content: 

The content is very informative and tells the reader exactly who the singer and songwriter are. Describes the history of their life and provides good sources to back it up

 Organization: 

I thought the organization of the article was really good. The sources used were accurate and the tone used was very neutral which made the article very good.

 Overall Impressions: 

I thought this article was really good! The organization was very concise and the tone used was very neutral. It sounds like this artist is smaller and might not have as much info! I am having a similar issue while trying to add content. I would say maybe add some more information but that might be hard to find!