User:LaurenLainez/Overview of 21st-century propaganda/10Adrian Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm reviewing LaurenLainez draft on the Overview of 21st-century propaganda page.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LaurenLainez/Overview_of_21st-century_propaganda?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Overview of 21st-century propaganda

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a good start on the improvement of this page. The lead is way better, but I still don't think it says enough about what the article contains. Maybe you should mention that you're going to talk about the propaganda in different countries and not in general even though the title implies that.

When it comes to the North-Korea part, the new info and source you added improves the article a lot and makes it more neutral which is a problem with the article now. You should find a source that can confirm what the state-owned publishing house is named or maybe remove that part if you can't find it.

I don' have a lot to say on the paragraph about China. It looks like the sources you have added there is good. And the way you have written it looks good and is easy to follow and understand.

Response
Thanks for the advice! I will look for that source for the North Korea section