User:Lauren Holcomb/TOI-700/Adrianarias44802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lauren Holcomb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lauren%20Holcomb/TOI-700?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * TOI-700

Peer-Review
I feel that the edit you are making is much needed, considering the lead section of the existing article is bereft of background and elaboration of TOI-700. One small change you could make is to bold TOI-700 and any of its monikers in the article, as this is the established custom of Wikipedia articles. You may consider removing or modifying the quote that constitutes the last sentence of your edit, as the training modules expressed that we should reserve quoting works verbatim, unless meaning and significance can only be fully conveyed in a direct quote. Otherwise, per the training modules, we should try our best to paraphrase the information. Overall, I think your edit is going great. If possible, I think doing another section would help make the article more substantial.

Response:

Thank you for your feedback. I do agree that I shouldn't have ended in a direct quote and should fix that. This wiki article definitely needs to have more information about TOI 700e, but there hasn't been much research on it yet. However, there are plans to re-explore the planet in the next year so there should be more data and understanding of this exoplanet soon! I will be adding another section, and I agree with you that I should do so.

-Lauren