User:Lauren Holcomb/TOI-700/Ricawilo Peer Review

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(Lauren Holcomb)


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Excellent and timely addition to the TOI-700 article, clear and informative. This is exciting information that you have uncovered! Minimal changes to suggest: In the original article TOI-700 includes a hyphen. The first sentence is missing an "a" (...700 e is a terrestrial exoplanet). The fourth sentence should begin with the words "Ten percent smaller..." Consider adding the description of the surface of TOI-700 e as "rocky" as described in your reference.

Response:

Thanks for the feedback and catching my errors! I will update those edits and I am glad to hear you think this information is exciting! There's not much information about this planet yet, but within the next year NASA will begin exploring it again!

- Lauren