User:Laurenburschel/Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics/Cbittinger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Igutierrez3, LandShark71 and Laurenburschel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laurenburschel/Academy_of_Nutrition_and_Dietetics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics
 * Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great work so far! I think the content and sections your group is choosing to add to from the article are great! The Wikipedia page does not have much information in these sections, so I think adding to those sections is a smart idea. The content that you added in the initiatives section provides more context and key information to that section. The bullet point that was added under the initiatives section was a great addition because it updated the requirements with the new change that will take effect in 2024. This change keeps the article current and up to date for the readers.

Your group also did a great job at keeping the neutral and non bias tone. You provided the facts without trying to persuade the audience. The writing was clear, the wording was not confusing, and I did not find any grammatical errors. The additions got right to the point which is necessary for a great Wikipedia article.

The addition of the credible sources was a great change your group made. Updating the citations to credible and current sources helps make this edit stronger. When clicking through all the links, they all worked except number 5. That page does not exist anymore. I would recommend updating that citation or finding another source that supports that idea. However, all the links that did work, were from credible sources which was great.

All in all, I think the additions added were necessary and provided key information and citations to the article. You guys have a great start!