User:Laurenburschel/Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics/Hslagel23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Igutierrez3, LandShark71, Laurenburschel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laurenburschel/Academy_of_Nutrition_and_Dietetics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics

Evaluate the drafted changes
Tone and Balance

The tone of the text has remained neutral with the information added. The information is not biased towards a certain position. The information added contributed well to what was already in the article.

Sources and References

The majority of the sources in the sandbox were just added. For the 6th resource that is linked within the text, I am having trouble getting to the website that is linked. Other than that, all of the resources that were linked within the text are reliable sources with good information about the Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics as well as Dietitians.

Organization

Since there was not a lot of information added to what was previously there, I believe that the organization is good. It is easy to understand and follow along. The content added contributed in a positive way and added information necessary.