User:Laurenburschel/Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics/Tewert23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laurenburschel group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Laurenburschel/Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the information given. It is relevant to the topic of the Academy of Nutrition and Dietetics by discussing the registered dietician nutritionist. The content is up to date as far as I can see, one of the bullet points is discussing even something as recent as 2024. To my knowledge I am not aware if anything is missing, only because I don't know practically anything about this topic, but it seems this topic was missing on the page so it's a good addition.

The content I am reading seems very neutral and fact driven. None of the information is leaning towards a certain view or belief so bias is in check. I believe that the facts are represented well even though they aren't "view" points rather than facts about registered dietician nutritionists.

1st link takes me to the website but not where the information is held. Second website seems trustworthy enough about dietetics. 3rd link takes me to a GoDaddy page meaning that it isn't a real website anymore. The 4th link takes you to a server temporarily unavailable page. This means I can only access 2/4 websites, however the ones I did check seem like good sources. They seem relevant, I am not sure about diversity since I can only see 2 of them. Maybe adding some peer reviewed articles will be a good source to add because they provide good facts and are a good resource to have.