User:Laurenharper02/LGBTQ psychology/Jjcham Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laurenharper02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laurenharper02/LGBTQ_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBTQ psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

·      Lead had no additions

Content:

·      Added content was very relevant and interesting

Tone and Balance:

·      Added content was very neutral and had no viewpoints that leaned one direction compared to the other

Sources and References:

·      Sources and references are reliable and working

Organization:

·      Addition was concise, clear, and easy to read

·      No grammatical or spelling errors within the added information

Images and Media:

·      No new images were added

Overall impressions:

·      Overall, I think the content that was added was relevant and added interesting information to the article. However, there was only one paragraph added to the article, so that one paragraph was great, but the article was overall not changed. To improve the article more, you should add more than one paragraph of information you find about the article. I think the gender section was lacking and you could add all the different types of genders that belong to the LGBTQ community.