User:Laurensirianni/Business/Adesuwai Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laurensirianni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Laurensirianni/Business


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Business

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead briefly explain what the article section is about by including a well and concise introductory sentence. I notice the sources are well cited and are include within the article. Due to the fact you linked your sources within your article, I was able to easily access it. The article remained a neutral tone throughout the reading. One thing I would suggest is to make sure you title your lead and article body.