User:Laurensirianni/Business/Dgorny3 Peer Review

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Laurensirianni


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 * Business

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, I think your draft is organized, and the information presented is relevant to the article. However, there is a lack of citations used, and it is unclear where you retrieved the information. Make sure that each sentence has a citation. The links work for your articles, and your sources are newspapers or informational websites that seem reliable and unbiased. These sources also support the information in your draft. The draft remains neutral throughout its entirety, and there are a good number of definitions used. It helps the reader easily understand the information. I think your topic heading can be "Human Resources," and you can put it under the "Organization and Regulation" heading in the original article. One thing you could add to your draft is examples of companies that have Human Resources.