User:Laurensirianni/Business/JCLemke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Laurensirianni


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laurensirianni/Business?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Business

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - Very concise, and it gets to the point regarding Human Resources. I would edit the part about why it's crucial because it doesn't describe HR in general, but overall very good.

Content - Describes the history of Human Resources and the point of its existence very clear and concisely.

Tone/Balance - As a short section in a larger article, it goes into detail just enough to give a clear overview about Human Resources. It doesn't get wordy and there aren't any major balance issues.

Sources/References - Three trustworthy sources all regarding Human Resources, no issues at all.

Organization - The article body starts off with the history and then goes into the subdivisions. I would flip this around to give a little more about HR itself first, and then the history.

Images/Media - N/A

Overall Impressions - Very good addition, everything is very clear with no major issues other than slight formatting problems.