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Article Evalution

my contribution to the talk page on the wikipedia page of "Emily Grierson" : Much of what is discussed in this article is relevant to Miss Emily herself, however not to the story "A Rose for Emily" as a whole. The information regarding Emily herself, and Emily's father is very relevant to how Emily has developed into the character that she is. Her father often smothered her and kept her on what you could call a short leash and prevented her from becoming her own person. This aspect of her life is often overlooked. Within this article Emily is referred to as being someone who cannot do much on her own, however this can be largely accredited to her father and the way in which he raised her. This article provides great coverage on her father and is just in doing so because of the fact that he is a huge factor that ultimately contributes to the way that Emily is. Laurtor (talk) 22:16, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

The article that I read on Emily Grierson presented a variety of other ideas than what he had discussed in class. Although there were many concepts and ideas that I found to be different, there were also a variety of ideas that mirrored what we discussed in class. The way in which Emily's character develops is in part hugely affected by the way in which her father raised her. I feel as though this aspect was underrepresented because of the magnitude to which her father's implications spread into Emily's life. Emily is described to be dependent of others which is understandable considering she was never even allowed to be independent or authentically herself because of her father's sphere of infuence. This was underrepresented within the article because it can be viewed as the greatest factor of what makes Emily who she is.