User:Lauteur02/Palimpsest/Soniakilcoyne Peer Review

General info
Lauteur02
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lauteur02/Palimpsest
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Palimpsest

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The writing in their sandbox relates to the article at large. The article is talking about palimpsests, and the sandbox draft is detailing the plays that have been fragmented and covered in order to write something else. I think, however, that it should be specified where in the article this draft will go. If it will be added to the "famous example" subsection, then perhaps there should be more sandboxing done with content regarding the meat of the article.

The article only has 8 sources in the reference section. Perhaps this user could find more sources to enrich the article and also write more information from those sources.