User:Lax.girl.2003/Energy planning/Blizzardsnow7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lax.girl.2003


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lax.girl.2003/Energy_planning?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Energy planning
 * Energy planning

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article title: "Energy Planning"

Notes:

- You have some solid ideas that I think will fit well in your article. More specifically, I think the current US administration and policy making stance on energy topics would

really help make the article feel current.

- In the articles you linked there is plenty of information that is relevant, so the next step is to paraphrase and turn the key bullets you have into paragraphs.

- Additional things you can consider are adding images / graphs to help illustrate your information. For example, the reliance on coal in energy production is something

that I think would have nice graphics that would help make the information more digestible for the reader.

- You have to make your references and citations in Wikipedia format.