User:Laylaadeyahmed/Leblouh/Echristinem Peer Review

I think your page looks great! I am sorry my feedback is late, I wasn't in class that day and somehow missed this review article assignment on my dashboard.

I think you did a great job of including relevant photos and citing all of your sentences.

This was very informative and definitely filled a gap in information on Wikipedia.

My suggestions to make your page even better would be to maybe add some subheadings within your text so that viewers can easily navigate your page. Also, maybe you could add some related pages linked at the bottom so that people interested could continue studying other similar practices or history of the culture.

Great Job! I cant wait to hear more about your work in class

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