User:Laylagoldberg19/Participatory defense/Melinab21 Peer Review

General info
Laylagoldberg19
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Laylagoldberg19/Participatory defense
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Participatory defense

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the addition to the lead section allowed for a better understanding of what participatory defense is and how it is used. The writing was clear and concise and corresponded to the following sections, namely community impact, from the original article. Proper citation was properly added at the end of the statement.