User:Laylagoldberg19/Transgender legal history in the United States/Melinab21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?Laylagoldberg19
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Laylagoldberg19/Transgender legal history in the United States:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Transgender legal history in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the addition to the lead section provides a more descriptive and relevant explanation for the information the article presents. The edits added to the wording of the paper are more concise than what was previously stated in the original. The long list of legal case issues are further explored throughout the article so I agree with the editor's idea of keeping the description short for the lead section. Since the original article includes sections corresponding to different time periods, maybe the lead section, or even another section can further introduce the differences between the time periods and serve as a comparative analysis.