User:Laylagoldberg19/User:Riyarajani/HomelesswomenintheUnitedStates/Laylagoldberg19 Peer Review

General info
riyarajani
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Riyarajani/HomelesswomenintheUnitedStates
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Evaluate the drafted changes
- your additions are detailed in describing the effects of Reaganomics, listing specific programs that were cut and detailing their impact on women's economic autonomy and safety in the workplace

- you have detailed citations throughout, linking back to sources for each claim, although the directive to "add citation" suggests that some claims were intended to be further supported

- the added discussion on how liberal and feminist discourses interpreted and responded to women's poverty add a layer of analysis regarding societal reactions and ideological battles over the period.

- it was a bit difficult to compare this addition to the original content as you did not create a legend.