User:Lbenegas4/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Pediatric endocrinology


 * Article Evaluation
 * lead: there is a lead sentence, but no major sections that go into detail about what pediatric endocrinology includes
 * content: only 4 paragraphs, each are a few sentences long, no explanation or details on each topic, needs more bulk to each section
 * tone and balance: tone is neutral, no bias is obvious, good start on general overview of pediatric endocrinology
 * organization: only a few paragraphs, no real sections or more in depth topics
 * images and media: no images or media
 * overall: needs a lot of work, can go into detail about history and most common diseases that are caused by problems in pediatric endocrinology
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Option 2

 * Article title
 * Reproductive endocrinology and infertility


 * Article Evaluation
 * lead: there is a pretty detailed lead section, where it describes what the topic is and what reproductive endocrinology and infertility specialists are
 * content: there are 3 different sections, but each are lacking in content, can use an explanation of the history of the topic, as well as the different disorders associated with the specialty
 * tone and balance: neutral tone, needs more information overall about topic
 * organization: good organization so far, needs more sections
 * images and media: no images or media, could use figures and descriptions
 * overall: pretty good start, needs more information to preexisting sections, needs new sections with detailed explanations
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Option 3

 * Article title
 * Hypothalamic disease


 * Article Evaluation
 * lead: very informative, detailed lead, explains what hypothalamic disease is, but can go into which diseases they are
 * content: lots of sections, each paragraph a few sentences long but could use more information/ sources, could include treatment options, detection methods, etc
 * tone and balance: neutral tone, no bias found
 * organization: well organized, needs more sections and explanations
 * images and media: no images, could use some figures to demonstrate which diseases/ causes
 * overall: very important, can include more information regarding diseases and effects on physiology
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Option 4

 * Article title
 * Stress hyperglycemia


 * Article Evaluation
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Option 5

 * Article title
 * Article Evaluation
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