User:Lbhatt6763/Harlem Renaissance/Sydnit2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbhatt6763


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lbhatt6763/Harlem Renaissance


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Harlem Renaissance

Evaluate the drafted changes
There was only a sentence in your sandbox so far but I believe the religion section of the article have some more information added possibly. I believe the criticism section could also have more added to it. The Musical Theatre section is very short as well and I believe more could be added. I like that you added information about LGBTQ+ experiences, the article severely lacked representation in that aspect.