User:Lbothwe/New Zealand/Brprate Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbothwe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lbothwe/New Zealand
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * New Zealand

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am going to preface this peer review by saying I have no idea what changes you made. Because you copy and pasted the whole article into your sandbox instead of just including your edits, it is really hard for me to see what you personally added even when looking at the history of your sandbox.

Lead
The Lead was long, but included necessary information about the geographic location and history of New Zealand. I see no issues. Looking at the Contents, I would expect every one of those sections based on the information provided here.

Content
No information appears to be off-topic. All of the content seems up to date. I saw that there is no section about the biogeographical history of New Zealand, which I think could be interesting to add. I remember New Zealand being mentioned in the Pleistocene chapters (8 and 9) in our book, which may provide some good information about how the island has moved throughout time.

Tone and Balance
The content added is neutral. I was particularly looking at the politics and military section when evaluating this, which are obvious places that bias can be implemented. However, I found no such evidence.

Sources and References
There are over 300 references listed, which is definitely a sufficient amount. I clicked on a few, and they seemed like reliable sources. It looks like there are so many people constantly editing this page that I doubt a bad reference would last very long.

Organization
Again, there are so many people editing it that I did not find any spelling errors. Also, everything is well written in my opinion. I love the way the sections are organized with the proper use of subsections as well.

Images and Media
All of the images used here are beautiful and showcase the important parts of New Zealand. They all seem properly cited.

Overall Impression
This is a really well developed article with many people constantly editing it and making it better. I think you could find pretty much any sort of information you wanted to about New Zealand in this article. The only idea I really have to help you is to maybe add a biogeography section.