User:Lbothwe/New Zealand/Leonardlauryn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbothwew


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lbothwe/New Zealand


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft linked in the sandbox is very extensive, but I am having a hard time distinguishing the sections contributed from the student in our BIO 462 course. The article touches on relevant topics such as history, politics, geography and culture. With the focus of biogeography in our course, I think you could find more sources to further expound the section titled "Biodiversity."

3/18/21 (10:05AM) lbothwe- Hi Lauryn! Thanks for the feedback, I think I was using the sandbox to edit everything at once so I could add where needed, instead of using it has just the spot for new information. Maybe my mistake, or just another way to go about it, sorry it made it difficult to track changes! I agree, I think I can further add tot he biodiversity section. Thanks for your input, I'll work on it.