User:Lbucla88/Whole genome bisulfite sequencing/Gnurwono Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbucla88


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lbucla88/Whole_genome_bisulfite_sequencing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Whole genome bisulfite sequencing

Lead

 * Lead is update with new content, which is good
 * good connection to topic in the content

Content

 * content seems to be relevant and up to date
 * some missing sections, but I think it's because it's a work in progress

Tone and Balance

 * content is neutral and seems unbiased

Sources and References

 * good variety or sources with different authors
 * good use of secondary sources

Organization

 * content is well organized and well written, no comments for improvement here
 * I like how you address applications and limitations

Images & Media

 * good caption on images
 * need to edit second figure to say figure 2 not figure 1

Overall Impressions

 * article is definitely more complete and thorough, better organized with more information
 * strengths: clear organization and thought process
 * improve: need to fill in blanks