User:Lbucla88/Whole genome bisulfite sequencing/Neejpadman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbucla88


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lbucla88/Whole genome bisulfite sequencing


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Whole genome bisulfite sequencing

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:[edit]

 * Includes introductory sentence with links to helpful terminology.
 * Defines Whole genome bisulfite sequencing concisely
 * Includes intro on history, methodology, and applications cover later.

Content:[edit]

 * Relevant and up to date content
 * History: explains the previous methods and their limitations and the processes that lead to WGBS discovery.
 * Methodology: breaks down into subheadings by step makes it clear and easy to understand.
 * Applications: Sub-sections are useful in separating concepts and it helps understand its use in DNA methylation and developmental biology

Tone/Balance:[edit]

 * Neutral tone
 * no bias
 * No persuasion

Sources/References:[edit]

 * Relevant and up to date sources
 * all statements of facts are supported by citations at the end of sentences
 * working links

Organization:[edit]

 * Many subsections that are well developed to provide structure and clarity
 * grammer and spelling excellent

New article:[edit]

 * More than 2-3 reliable secondary sources used
 * Sources cover history, applications and limitations of WGBS

Overall Impressions:[edit]

 * good article
 * improves over original article which had limited content
 * Pictures help break up text and help increase visual appeal as well as readability,