User:Lbucla88/Whole genome bisulfite sequencing/NolanOriger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lbucla88


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lbucla88/Whole_genome_bisulfite_sequencing?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Whole_genome_bisulfite_sequencing&diff=1046132313&oldid=1015146151 (old version before edits)

Lead
The Lead has been significantly updated and is now more detailed and properly sums up the rest of the article in a clear manner.

Content
The added content is not only relative to the topic, but also greatly expands on the previously small aspects of the article. All of the additional content fits under the general topic.

Tone and Balance
The new content is scientific in nature and therefore remains very neutral. There are no opinions or positions presented, only facts.

Sources and References
All of the new information correctly cites a variety of scientific literature and touches on a broad array of journals and authors. The source links work.

Organization
The new content is very well written and certainly represents scientific writing found elsewhere on Wikipedia.

Images and Media
The images greatly enhance the reading experience and work well to better explain the topic.

Overall impressions
The new content undoubtedly improves the quality of the article. The previous article was clearly a mostly neglected stub article while Llucla88's additions turn it into a fully functioning Wikipedia article. I'm certain this is one of the best contributions in the class.