User:Lcastillo4/Discrimination of Immigrants in the NBA/Khyamamoto Peer Review

General info
This is a peer review of the article, "Discrimination of Immigrants in the NBA" by user Lcastillo4
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 * Lead Section
 * I think that the lead section of this article is very good. It provides necessary context for the article, explaining the implementation and growth of international players in the NBA, but it is still concise and gives an overview of what the article will be about.
 * Content
 * I think the content within this article was picked well. I liked the addition of both the sections on current NBA demographics, as well as the section defining the accomplishments of international players in the NBA. I do not think that any specific sections are missing, however I feel that within the "Players" and "Salary" sections, there could be more specific examples. For example, in the "Salary" section, you talk about international players having lower salaries than their colleagues, but this can be strengthened with an example. Overall, the content present is concise and gets the point across.
 * Tone and Balance
 * I think the tone and balance of this article is good. It is impartial throughout and does not seem to make a comment about the morality of discrimination in the NBA. It only lists facts that can be checked and verified, and leaves the rest to the reader of the article, which makes the article more reliable and fits Wikipedia's standards.
 * Sources and References
 * The content of the article seems to be from reliable sources, such as the official NBA website, and academic or reliable sources. I think that all of the sentences and statements within the "Players" and "Salary" sections have been cited well, but I think the information in the "Demographics" section could be cited in the same way. The amount of sources used shows that this article goes into the depth of the topic well and covers different angles.
 * Organization
 * This article is formatted well, I like how there are different forms of lists for talking about different places and players. I did not have any issues reading this article or understanding it, as the order of the sections made a lot of sense.
 * Images and Media
 * I like the use of images to highlight the different players. I feel that the graph used in the "Salary" section was good, but it would also be helpful to have a graph comparing the salaries of American and international players to drive home the point. Overall, the use of images and other media was good.
 * Other
 * As this is the creation of a new article, I think the sources used show that this is a notable subject, and I like that this article topic covers discrimination faced by minority groups in a major entertainment and sports field.
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lcastillo4/Discrimination of Immigrants in the NBA
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