User:Lcortez26/Child bereavement/Jackhan8582 Peer Review

General info
Lcortez26
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lcortez26/Child bereavement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Child bereavement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is all very relevant to the topic and adds to the well-roundedness of the article. It provides thorough information without being redundant or repetitive of information already presented by former editors. It is well organized and cohesive. I would say that the "Phase 2" subsection of Children Conceptualizing Death and the "Preoccupation and Idealization with the Deceased" subsection of Manifestations of Grief in Children need a few more citations and sources, it is unclear where all these statements of information might have come from. Creating links through key terms like "somatic" and "psychosomatic symptoms" could also be helpful to make the article and information within it more accessible.