User:Lcwest/Education reform/Luliloisel Peer Review

= Peer Review =

Lead
After reading the lead to this article I feel like I have a good grasp of the concept. I think this is a really strong lead section. The lead does reflect the most important information by explaining what exactly Education Reform is and why it is important.

Structure
The articles structure makes sense. I can see by your sandbox that you are editing multiple sections and when I look at the live article I can see that the sections make sense.

Balance
My initial reaction was that the lead section was a bit lengthy, but I am not entirely sure if that really matters. It's an awesome lead, but the length made me pause. I think the article is neutral. After reading this article I do not think I could guess the authors personal feelings towards the issue. This article does not make claims on behalf of unnamed groups or people. I think the article does a good job of staying neutral. There wasn't anything that stood out to me particularly that were overly positive OR negative.