User:Lds7ht/sandbox

Who am I
Lds7ht is a student a Missouri University of Science and Technology.

Rachel Lloyd
(9/20/2019)

This article was one of the first that I looked at and there were several Items that I found interesting.

Lead

 * The interdiction does not cover tall of the information in the article and it includes information that is not expanded on further in the article.
 * The lead includes a brief description of her studies but none of the other topics.
 * The Lead talks about her doctorate of chemistry, and her being a part of the American Chemistry Society.
 * The lead is rather concise, providing a lot of information clearly, and quickly.

Content

 * All of the content is relevant.
 * The content that is there is up to date
 * The page does not give the details of her work instead it says that she simply worked on things.
 * ie: she worked on the Nebraska Agricultural Experiment Station, but it doesn't actually say what she did

Tone and Balance

 * The article is neutral.
 * The article appears to be unbiased.
 * No one viewpoint is over or under rated.
 * The article does not try to persuade me to any opinion.

Sources/References

 * There are several uncited facts.
 * The Sources that are there are thorough and current.
 * The links do work.

Organization

 * The article is well written, but it requires more headings to encourage more information and detail to be put in the article.

Images and Media

 * The article lacks images and media.

Talk Page

 * The conversations on the talk page are searching for more detail on the already present information.
 * The article is start class and is a part of the Biography and Woman Scientist Projects.
 * Wikipedia searches for new information to present where as our class is learning is set.

Overall impressions

 * It is a good starter article.
 * It has many topics that can be expanded upon.
 * The article lacks body and detail.
 * Overall it is underdeveloped.

Uraniborg
(9/27/1019)

In conjunction with DustyHC

The article covers the layout of Uraniborg in great detail. However, the only topic is history and it can be split into several topics. The talk page has an outline That would allow for more information and for a more clear article. One topic that I find lacking is the daily life of the people living at Uraniborg. Also lacking is a clear explanation of what was done at the observatory, and its destruction and current restoration.

Possible sources

 * Thoren, Victor E.                                     (1991)                                    The Lord of Uraniborg: A biography of Tycho Brahe. With contributions by John R. Christianson.


 * Gaulke, Karsten                                     (2015)                                    Perfect in Every Sense.

Editing
Restoration of the surrounding gardens began in 1985 with the goal of replanting of 16th century garden. Archeological studies of the plant material were done by the Swedish University of Agricultural Sciences and the Landskrona Department of Culture in order to determine the plant type and location.