User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides/GoldFinch14 Peer Review

General info
Ldw15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hohenbuehelia petaloides

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your added info to the lead that reflected the rest of the article, which was really good. Your lead is concise and informative, really good job Lila. Also i love you Lila. All the content you added makes sense for the article and relates to the mushroom. Some of your info and sources may be a little out of date, but I'm sure mine is too, and I figure the mushroom hasn't changed a whole bunch so I think you're fine. The stuff you added is neutral and nothing seems biased. Proud of you, slay queen. Everything you added is well-written and well organized. The only things I would consider adding are maybe a few pictures, and any more fun little tidbits of information you can find. -Aimee