User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides/Thea.sar Peer Review

General info
Ldw15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hohenbuehelia petaloides

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

I think you did a good job of updating the original lead of the article to reflect the other additions in information you added, this sets up the information for the article without going into too much detail. I think your lead is concise, and includes relevant information.

Content:

I think all your content is relevant information to the article topic, nothing seems unnecessary. I don't know much about the topic, so I'm not sure if any information is "missing" but I think that there is still room to build the article with more information.

Tone and Balance:

I think your tone is very neutral, and you only state the facts. There are no apparent biases as to how the information in the article is represented.

Sources and References:

I see that you have a list of references from where you got your information from. All your sources seem to be reliable, but 1 or 2 seem to be more dated than your other sources, maybe make sure the information is still reliable. Your links are working, I clicked through all of them.

Organization:

I think your article is organized well. I like how from the lead it goes to a general description and then to more specific details about your topic. I did not notice any grammatical or spelling errors.

Images and Media:

I think the images are definitely helpful in comprehension, and they are labelled well.

Overall Impressions:

I think your contributions definitely heighten the quality of the article, I think it definitely helps in building a greater understanding of your topic and goes more in depth than the original does. I definitely think there is more information out there that could be added to your article, but its coming along very nicely and has already improved so much.