User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides/Tmp1071 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Ldw15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ldw15/Hohenbuehelia petaloides - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hohenbuehelia petaloides

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your edits look good so far! From working from very little material in the original article, I can see how much you've expanded upon your topic with reputable sources. For example, your work in the Taxonomy section is a huge difference compared to the original article, as you made it easier to read and comprehend. Your information within the Description section and the Habitat and Distribution section are both well written!

My main suggestion is that the lead section feels very choppy and doesn't flow well. You seem to jump around between your ideas. Adding a few transition words that don't affect the neutrality of the piece would serve well. Overall, very good job!