User:LeAnnegarcia2/Social construction of gender/Lizenacruz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LeAnnegarcia2/Social construction of gender


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LeAnnegarcia2/Social_construction_of_gender?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social construction of gender

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think that the edits you have in your Sandbox are great information to include. Since your article is a bit lengthy, i would make edits to the "promoting change and criticism" subtopic. Some citations are missing throughout that subtopic. I also checked some references as well as the other articles linked and from the ones i checked they all seem to be working. Other than that i think you are doing a great job on the edits you have so far!