User:Leafsfan3/Organic synthesis/Thanhthe3200 Peer Review

General info
They are Leafsfan3 and SarahRundle
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Leafsfan3/Organic synthesis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Organic synthesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The writers haven't worked on their Lead yet.

Content and Organization

- The content is amazing. The writers have added a large amount of information that is useful for the article.

- The content is up-to-date.

- I think adding new changes or successes in these mentioned fields may provide better understanding in the development history.

- The content organization is easy to read and follow. However, the section organization is not really clear. A lead may help in this case.

Tone and Balance

- The tone is neutral. The writers don't have any claims that are heavily biased.

Sources and References

- Personally, the writers' references are from reliable sources. However, links of references from Chemistry LibreTexts don't work. Maybe the writers can find journal articles about these techniques or any research that used the techniques.

- Generally, the citation and references were made properly.

- The writers may need to double-check the in-text citation format.

Images and Media

- The writers have not worked on images and tables yet. Considering adding more images or tables may be excellent, especially when talking about procedure or development history.

- A table of different methods for Ibuprofen versus different outcomes or dates may help the Relevance of Organic Synthesis section.

Overall impression

- In conclusion, the writers have made good changes for the articles. The suggested edits are impressive and apparently the writers have a clear plan.

- More references can improve the reliability of the information.

- Adding images and tables may help the text-heavy section or section with many information (such as Synthetic Techniques and Relevance of Organic Synthesis).