User:LeahJones13/News Feed/Ninatravassos Peer Review

General info

 * I will be peer reviewing LeahJones13 's work on the article News Feed.

Lead
Guiding questions:

The lead has been updated by reworking a run-on sentence for clarity. Small edits were made in order to ensure the fluidity of the lead. The lead is not overly detailed, instead, it contains a very concise statement of what the article is about. In fact, the primary statement could be more explored by adding more content to it.

Content
There was no actual content added to the article only a source and necessary grammatical and fluidity adjustments.

Tone and Balance
The source added appears to be neutral and does not make any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position

Sources and References
The source added is a reliable secondary source of information. They thoroughly reflect literature on the topic and it is also up to date. The link added works.

Organization
My peer's editing contributed to a more concise, clear, and easy to read article by fixing grammatical errors and sentence structures. The citation added was well placed.

Images and Media
No images or media were added.

Overall impressions
The editing has contributed to a more easy to read article. As well as to a more reliable article given the addition of a citation. Overall, good job done. Although the changes were small, they really reflect good work and add to the reading.