User:LeahShrestinian/sandbox

Hi! This is Alejandro Ortega. I think the organization of the article is definitely a good starting point. I also think your citations appear to be reliable. Make sure to include sixteenth century sources. I would rename the section "Attack on Coatlicue," in order to make it more accessible to someone who does not have much background on the deity you are discussing. I would also shorten the summary of the page (at the top) and would move some of that information into the corresponding section. Aleo1200 (talk) 02:33, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

Draft of Article