User:LeahWodajo1/Polyembryony/Starwarsfan6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LeahWodajo1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LeahWodajo1/Polyembryony?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Current article: Polyembryony

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.

Hi Leah, here's my feedback:


 * I noticed you added two references, but I don't see the content it goes with.
 * Also, the article you chose needs a picture or diagram or two, because it's good to be able to have visuals of concepts.
 * The lead section needs a longer definition, since it should be able to refer to things in the body of the article.
 * In the vertebrates section, add a part about the phenomenon in humans, since it's mentioned in the lead section and it would be good to mention it, since only having an application of polyembryony in armadillos doesn't demonstrate the phenomenon well. Add at least two more species that this occurs in so readers can get a good idea of how it can happen.
 * You should also add more terms to the see also section - it can include topics/terms that were mentioned but don't need to be explained in great detail, so if a reader wants to know about it, they can go to that page.
 * You haven't really added anything, but I gave you some starting points.

- Emily