User:Leah mt/Therese of Saxe-Hildburghausen/Alessandra.a-m.conco Peer Review

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Leah mt
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Leah mt/Therese of Saxe-Hildburghausen
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Therese of Saxe-Hildburghausen

Evaluate the drafted changes
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First reference link broken

Many names could be, wikipedia linked

The first words that represent the title of the article should be in bold

First sentence good summary

Does the subheader have a heading? Will it all be added to the bibliography training

Seems pretty good, very factual no opinion.

This does a very good job on expanding on the subject, compared to the existing one

Simple Title ( good)