User:Leahgburke24/Bernie Sanders' Dank Meme Stash/BjornRobinson Peer Review

Peer Review:

The part about how it could hurt Bernie is very smart. I Might try to incorporate it into my additions. I will definitely check spelling and grammar -Johnny G
 * 1) Revise the overall structure and grammar of the article. I noticed a few sentences that are missing commas and feel a bit choppy.
 * 2) Try to find an article that you can quote or use data from to credit the points you are making. For example, “He was viewed as a funny guy which made Americans feel they could relate to him.” Could use a data point to prove that Americans liked him more with the memes.
 * 3) Consider adding aspects of how the dank memes could possibly hurt Bernie’s campaign because I’m sure that not all audiences would find the memes to prove that Bernie is a solid presidential candidate.

Thank you for reviewing our article! I think that your second point with your example quote is a great idea and I will add in something similar to your example quote. - Leah

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