User:Leahgburke24/Bernie Sanders' Dank Meme Stash/Phytalogreen Peer Review

General info
Leahburke24
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Leahgburke24/Bernie Sanders' Dank Meme Stash
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bernie Sanders' Dank Meme Stash

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would recommend proofreading the article and fixing any grammar mistakes. There were a few confusing sentences in the article draft that could be clarified by commas or rewording. For example, add a comma to "Bernie even if he was laughed at a bit benefited from this publicity." The draft also makes an argument that the Dank Meme Stash aided Bernie, but some of these claims need citations. I would also add information from the otherside to avoid only painting it in a positive light.

Thanks so much for this I will definitely add some citations, I have been in the process of finding something that works for my given topic. I will also add information from the other side and get sources for that as well for a devils advocate position.

Thank you for the feedback. I will definelty be adding citations. I will also check out for those grammar mistakes you mentioned. I also agree that adding information from the other side will most defiantly straighten the overall article. I am in the process of gathering sources that will enrich the argument on both sides.