User:Leahyaa/Slendertail lanternshark/Julievu2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Leahyaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Slendertail lanternshark


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Slendertail lanternshark

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Include what photophores are (maybe a hyperlink to another wiki page)

What is meant by “create a distinct pattern”? How is distinct? What does it normally look like in sharks? Maybe include a picture?