User:Lee3629/Air conditioning/JAckerley Peer Review

General info
Lee3629
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lee3629/Air_conditioning?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Air conditioning

Evaluate the drafted changes
The proposed edits to the page look like they would provide good added information to the Wikipedia article. The article itself seems to provide a good amount of comprehensive information on the topic. The biggest critique I have for the article itself is that all the sections are broken up and are relatively small. While they do give good information the layout and wordings could be better overall for the whole article. The sections you have written suffer less from this but there is still some component of not quite reaching deep enough into a specific topic for the section. For example, the section on refrigerants impact the ozone layer could be expanded by just a bit to explain the basic surroundings of the situation to be a more informative section on this article. Some of the sections in your draft also go for some stretches without having references which isn't necessarily a bad thing but there are some claims that require a citation. Overall the information you have drafted to include in the article looks good and is well formatted.