User:LeeLaiben/Monastic garden/AreHc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username): LeeLaiban


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LeeLaiben/Monastic_garden


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monastic_garden

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the way the article way reorganized is nice, it is easier to read and flows better. Separating the sections about the cemetery and the garden will allow for more information to be added to each.

For the food section I think that a different way to display the common vegetables would look nice. Maybe a table instead of bullet points.

In the section, "The Garden" sources for the last three paragraphs should be added.

Response:
Thank you so much for the notes! The goal was definitely to make the article flow a lot better. As for the food and garden section, I really appreciate the suggestions and I will work to implement them!