User:Leeperhb/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Lisa Jones (scientist)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it is an article about an accomplished scientist and educator, and a women in science. It also caught my attention because it was so short, and I wondered if the length was enough to educate about the scientist.

Evaluate the article
This article was very precise and informational. There did not seem to be any extraneous information. However, it was very short. The lead is concise and gives us a good idea of the who the article is about. The content is relevant but could have had more details included. The article seems to have a neutral tone and avoids using words like "best." The article has numerous sources but no media. The talk page includes criticisms of the scientist and article, and how the publisher is responding to those criticisms. Overall, the article does well on being informational and concise, but could expand on their scientist more.