User:Leeperhb/Michelle Tseng/Ishira25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Leeperhb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Leeperhb/Michelle Tseng
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Leeperhb/Michelle_Tseng?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Same as above

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead
 * Your lead section is concise and to the point. It definitely highlights who she is. I appreciate the picture of her that you included on the side as well, but I would also add a box that would include additional details such as her education. Also, I'm not sure why, but the "Contents" box appears to be missing in your lead section.
 * Content
 * You have lots of great information about her! It would be nice to have some details about her early life (such as where she grew up, etc.) if that is possible to find. Similarly, it would be nice to know where she completed her undergraduate work. All of your content definitely seems up to date.
 * Under Selected Publications, I'm not sure why the PMID's are not linked. I would double check that to facilitate easy access to the linked papers. Also, I really appreciated that you bolded where she is credited in the publications.
 * Tone and Balance
 * You have an extremely neutral, unbiased tone. It is definitely to the point and sounds like a Wikipedia article.:)
 * Sources and References
 * You have definitely used diverse sources, including reliable secondary sources of information. The links that I checked definitely worked!
 * Organization
 * Your organization is super clear and easy to follow! I particularly appreciated your section on "Social equality work." My only suggestion would be to improve the flow under the research section. Starting from the first time that you write "The Tseng lab," it is a little choppy.
 * Images and Media
 * Great use of visuals! I think it would be helpful to make your captions a little more descriptive. However, by adding a box that has her picture along with education etc, I think this will take care of this aspect for the picture of her.
 * For New Articles Only
 * This article appears to meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements and a range of sources were used. However, I would link a few more key words to other Wikipedia articles such as "global warming."
 * Overall Impressions
 * Overall, this is an extremely strong article! I particularly love your use of visuals; it really captures the reader's interest!
 * (I did notice that your Bibliography was empty; don't forget to add your sources there as well.:)