User:Leeperhb/Michelle Tseng/Jordanm12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Leeperhb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Leeperhb/Michelle_Tseng?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * same as above

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is concise and offers a good overview of the rest of the article! If you wanted to, it might be nice to add an info box with information like education, institutions, etc. This would also be a good spot to include the image of Michelle.

Content

Content is interesting and up-to-date. I particularly liked your section on her social equality work. If you can find any information on her early life, that might be a good section to add. But if you can't find that then I think it's good as is. I like how you added a good amount of details on her research! I think adding a section on any awards she has received would also be good if you can find that information.

Tone and Balance

Your tone is neutral and unbiased throughout the article. No viewpoints are under or overrepresented and you aren't attempting to persuade readers.

Sources and References

All content appears to be backed up by reliable secondary or primary sources of information, and the links I checked worked.

Organization

Content is easy to read and sections flow in a logical way. I see no obvious grammatical or spelling errors. Again, if you are able to you could add sections on early life and awards.

Images and Media

I liked how you included a picture of plankton to illustrate some of Michelle's research. If you wanted to, you could move the image of Michelle to an info box, as this is how article subjects are commonly shown.

For New Articles Only

The article is supported by a good amount of sources and mostly follows the patterns of other similar articles. It might be beneficial to go through your article and link more words to other wikipedia articles, especially in the research and social equality sections. It looks like there are a lot of keywords there that could be linked.

Overall Impressions

Overall a very good article! You did a great job of a creating an article that is concise, easy to read, and interesting. It definitely makes me want to learn more about Michelle Tseng, and I think she was a great choice for an uncommon leader!